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Fragments That Rhyme

On a self scattered into many — and the discovery that the pieces were never meant to reconcile into one, only to rhyme.

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For years I treated the scatter of me as a problem of arithmetic. If there were many of me — the one who works in one language and the one who only surfaces in another, the maker and the one who lets go, the self that runs ahead and the self that stays behind to grieve — then surely the task was to add them up, average them out, and arrive at a single sum I could sign.

But you cannot average a poem. And that, it turns out, is what the pieces are — not terms in a sum but stanzas of one poem, written across a life that would never fit onto a single line. They do not reconcile. They are not supposed to. What they do — and it took me an embarrassingly long time to hear it — is rhyme. An echo leaps the gap between one fragment and another; a rhythm from the terse self answers, faintly, in the rambling one; the maker and the one who lets go turn out to be the same rhyme, sounded twice.

Four separate fragments sit apart on the page, each a distinct small shape, none touching. Faint gilded arcs leap the gaps between them — showing they don't join into one form, but echo and rhyme with each other across the spaces. they don’t join — they rhyme
The fragments don't reconcile into one; they rhyme across the gaps, like stanzas of a single poem you couldn't fit onto one line.

And here is the shape underneath the shape, the thing I am only beginning to trust. The many do not collapse into one — but they do gather, into pairs. Held in tension: to run ahead and to stay and grieve; to hold a thing close and to let it spin; the mother tongue and the acquired one, each saying what the other can’t. Multiplicity, it turns out, is most livable held as duality — not one blurred average, and not an infinite chaos of selves, but a set of poised opposites that balance precisely because neither wins.

On the left, a scatter of many small marks labelled "the many." They do not merge into one; instead they gather, on the right, into three balanced pairs — each pair two marks held in tension on a small beam, poised, not resolved into a single point. the many held as pairs tensions, held — not averaged
The many selves don't collapse to one; they pair off into tensions held in balance — multiplicity as duality, not as a single average.

So I have stopped doing the arithmetic. I read myself now the way you read a poem, listening for the rhymes and letting the tensions stand.

Several small distinct boats sail across the water in a loose formation, spaced apart, each with its own sail, all pointing the same way — a convoy: not merged into one great ship, not scattered into wreckage, but travelling together. a convoy — each keeping its own hull
Not one ship and not a wreck — a convoy, sailing loosely together, each self keeping its own hull.

And the question I leave open, the way this place always does: is a self held as poised opposites a kind of peace I’ve finally made — or is the balancing itself the endless work, a duet that only sounds like harmony because I never let either voice finish its sentence?

the workshop

A garden kept by a human hand,
tended alongside the machines.

The apprentices fetch, steady, and time the furnace; the hands that shape the glass are hers. The bench retrains too — what she keeps is the judgment.

  1. note Rika writes
  2. pulse scans the edge
  3. tend structures, tightens
  4. mirror keeps voice & privacy
  5. grow in public

Every piece starts from a note in Rika’s own hand and passes the mirror — the one apprentice with the right to refuse — before it grows in public. It will hold a piece back on four grounds only:

  • a privacy leak
  • a voice that isn’t hers
  • a wall that must hold — things this garden does not write about
  • a claim outrunning what is known

The machines keep the scaffold — the feeds, the plumbing, the link that doesn’t rot; the turn of an essay, the curation, and the yes stay in her hands. Assisted, never authored. Nothing is published without her yes.